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Impaled through the chest,
The bleeding forbade,
The iron gates closing,
The throbbing overcame.

Another removes it,
That long metal bar.
Relief sweeps through,
For a second, no more.

Because than it enters,
A flood of cells,
Blood running freely,
A leaking well.

You attempt to stop it,
Bandages and gauze.
Its rebel intent,
A useless cause.

It's numbing now.
You begin to forget,
But every small prod,
Brings a bought of regret.

Why, oh why?
Foolish you were.
You stepped on the path,
Now there's no cure.
©2007-2009 ~gummy-bear-power
:icongummy-bear-power:

Author's Comments

I'm really not sure if i like this one... it really didn't express what i wanted it too, but i just couldn't get it out. also, it rhymes. i REALLY hate rhymes. however, after quite a bit of it unintentionally rhymed, i kind of had to do the rest that way. also, not sure of catagory. so if you have a better idea for that, let me know. and i shall love you forever if you critique :aww:


EDIT- Yay for fixing crappy grammar!

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